Steth's Story

[Steth Norun]

This is a 50-some page novella I wrote about Steth and his life when I was about 16 (many years before SWG:)). You have to download it but it reads pretty fast and furious so let me know what you all think:)

click the link then click "Our's is not to reason why"
jedinight.8m.com/fanfiction

[Asron]

I am so reading this when I get the time, thanks for posting it Steth

[Steth Norun]

First prize goes to whoever actually reads this thing! hehe

[corna]

wuts teh prize?

[Asron]

a date with deroga

[Jerek]

that was a good read bro

now i understand your ship's name

[Asron]

so far I've read the first 2 chapters, it's an interesting story line. I think one part you accidently posted twice

As he was cautiously peering out the window, he readied his blaster rifle. After recently turning to the Rebellion, and knowing just how severely the Empire punished those revolutionaries, he had little reason to believe that he would be alive too much longer. But he had never feared death. He had lived his life the best he knew how and he had no regrets. Sweat streaked from his brow, down his nose and dropped to the floor.
Suddenly, they were upon him.

That's right before Steth is in the simulation game thing where he plays as a Rebel, and it's also right before Sigder is tried. It's almost ironic that it's before both parts, just switch up some of the wording on Steth's bit and it really works.

I'm gonna try to read more tomorrow. Do you ever plan on making a second draft of this? I'd like to see how you'd revise it now, since you wrote it a while ago. I think there's a few bits that could be turned into stellar scenes if it was written a little differently, especially the scene where Trent informs Steth about the murder of his parents.

[Steth Norun]

No you read it exactly the way it was supposed to be read. That paragraph is written twice because the two scenes are mirroring one another. If it were a movie, there would be camera shots of both scenes flipping back and forth between each other and showing the parrallel.

I go back every now and then and read a chapter or two. I never really care enough to make a second draft because whats the point? Unless someone wants to publish me and give me money...*shrug*

[corna]

/clap very well done ...................................................since im the first one done when does deroga have an open night?

[corna]

(jk)

[Jerek]

i finished be4 ye corna

but dont worry, ill let you keep deroga

[corna]

goodie!
lol